I loved the story. The cadence of the prose at times had a bit of a heartbeat to it. I'm not quite sure how to describe it in an email. The short sentences and breaks between the text emphasised the episodic nature of the narrative, maybe?
Anyway, I liked it and it made me smile. I am happier for having experienced it.
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I loved the story. The cadence of the prose at times had a bit of a heartbeat to it. I'm not quite sure how to describe it in an email. The short sentences and breaks between the text emphasised the episodic nature of the narrative, maybe?
Anyway, I liked it and it made me smile. I am happier for having experienced it.